Serious Wraith is serious.

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lol Okay...

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the proportions of the face are really well done, especially his eyes and the nose. i also like the expression on his face and the way his mouth is not just some random line on the face. oh, and the fact that he has a chin many people forget about that.
what i have to point out is the fact that you got the shadows wrong. you see, the way his face is lit, from his left, there should be no shadowing on his nose and his forehead, instead you should accentuate them under his right eye

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Thanks! I appreciate all that. I definitely aimed to make the face look realistic since many styles tend to forget certain features like the chin, nostrils, and lips exist. The chin and skin lines above the lip bother me a little because the former is a little exaggerated and looks a little strange and the latter doesn't line up correctly with the middle of the lips. I plan to fix it all later, maybe.

You got me again. Though I'm not entirely sure about the forehead, since I just kind of figured there might be some shadowing there because his hair covers it. Sometimes I'm a little reckless with my shading.

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awesome job on this. The proportions are good and i love the eyes. His ear looks a little to big but otherwise its very good. ^_^

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Thanks. There are a lot of mistakes relating to his ear.

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its still good, and your welcome. ^_^

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wow i really like this! for a doodle its awesome and i really like the messy feel of it.
the lighting is a little bit off, but i think thats already been pointed out
other than that, i really like this

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Thanks

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Don’t fall asleep
In this room of the fallen

Don’t fall asleep
To the breathing of the walls

Don’t fall asleep
In this room of loss